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  • D187824

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    nice poem. the first three lines are captivating.

    VV i agree about the last line, though
    July 21st, 2012 at 06:43pm
  • Haikeru

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    I understand, I am not a fan of those kind of lines either, but I said it was a little harsh.
    And I think it fit in quite well..
    July 21st, 2012 at 05:16pm
  • tumblingcactus

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    i like it...but im not really fond of the last line
    July 21st, 2012 at 04:59pm
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