Forever Here - Comments

  • Carly.

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    Betty this poem... I don't know it just fits, something about it fits.
    LOve it x
    April 14th, 2008 at 04:29pm
  • Penguin.

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    That was pretty deep.
    That was really awesome Betty and I can understand that poem well.
    I'm gonna print it off =]
    April 9th, 2008 at 05:27pm
  • MakeMePretty

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    'Months fly by, all moves on
    Yet I remain forever here.
    I can't let go, I'll be waiting for you
    Year after haunting year.

    I am alone though other's grew
    Who expect me to move along.
    But my memory's sharp, I remember
    I just can't carry on.'

    I love thse two verses doll, they really struck a chord with me.
    Once again it's another fantastic, heartfelt poem. Don't you ever give up witing babe, you are way to talented to waste that gift.
    ily
    xoxo
    April 5th, 2008 at 09:42pm