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  • This.Useless.Heart.

    This.Useless.Heart. (115)

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    Oh my! This is absolutely beautiful.
    These two verses were especially exceptional.
    Throughout everything
    I always remember the
    way he brushed my heart

    because it is known
    better than any organ
    in this epiphany.

    You were able to communicate so much and convey so much feeling and also maintain form and flow. I'm very impressed!
    August 14th, 2012 at 01:53am
  • A Friendly Enigma

    A Friendly Enigma (100)

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    Beautifully written! Unfortunately, I too know how an aching heart feels...
    August 1st, 2012 at 04:53pm
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