In Her Arms - Comments

Thank you...

I really like it but you could work on the flow a bit. Love the topic. :)

I like the rythym in this poem its nice. There are some shorter lines though that would sound better longer. Also I love the subject. Its so nice. If you could add more connecting sentences that link what are writing about that would increase understanding. It will bring more clarity on how much love there is and what it is being described. Also limousine is one word.

poems about love should have more imagery about feelings.
Your other poem about love and Lancelot should have a story like tale beause it is historical. And you need to work on your old time speech. It was fun to read so this will make it better Inshallah. Okay all the best!!