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    I like this! It's cute and makes me want to go out and have an adventure with someone dear :)

    Side note- in your last stanza : "Cuz this is were
    Our life begins.
    Our chance of faliure
    Is very thin."

    You put 'Cuz this is "were" ', and I think you meant 'where'. If I am incorrect, I apologize!
    August 14th, 2012 at 10:10pm
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