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  • ll-Fantasia-ll

    ll-Fantasia-ll (100)

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    @inevitable_pain
    Thank you :] I try to make all of my poems relatable, even though I have no experience through any of the stuff I base my poems on...
    @ Tears.dance.at.Night
    Thank You! <3 :] I love comments on my poems, and both of your guys' made my day
    September 5th, 2012 at 01:03am
  • beautiful_disaster_

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    wow this was really good, deff relatable
    September 1st, 2012 at 10:51pm
  • Tears.dance.at.Night

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    it's really lovely. i adore the way you phrase the if's and then ask a question. it really adds to the poem.
    August 23rd, 2012 at 07:46pm
  • ll-Fantasia-ll

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    Thank you, that means a lot to me :3

    @ Lunalunita
    August 20th, 2012 at 07:35pm
  • Lunalunita

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    like it a lot
    August 20th, 2012 at 07:34pm