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  • ameida

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    @ Monstertea
    :P
    August 22nd, 2012 at 12:13am
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    @ Scripted_Siren
    hehe thank you :)
    August 22nd, 2012 at 12:13am
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    i really like this. it has a haunting feel to it, both through the rhythem and the phrase choices.
    August 22nd, 2012 at 12:10am
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    Wow amazingly written the flow is amazing for a second I heard a beat reads Like lyrics
    August 21st, 2012 at 06:14pm
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    @ PowerToThePolaroids
    hehe thank you :) i'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^
    August 21st, 2012 at 04:59pm
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    I like this! tis awesome lol i really like the one line"False pinky swears with sly fingers" great job
    August 21st, 2012 at 01:00am
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