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  • Still

    Still (100)

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    I would recommend a stable meter? Without it, the rhyme scheme sort of stumbles. The content itself is good, it just sounds a bit awkward like this.
    August 25th, 2012 at 11:51pm
  • yanniboo123

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    Absolutely amazing I love this so much it's incredible great job :)
    August 25th, 2012 at 11:44pm
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