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So Look at a Familiar Flame and Stare. - Comments

  • Ariveria

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    I really like this! The rhythm was great, the rhyming was pretty smooth (line 12 was just a bit off), and the imagery was great. It's a very enjoyable read! :)
    September 3rd, 2012 at 11:03pm
  • Guardian_0131

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    This is really good. :)
    August 31st, 2012 at 04:17am
  • Silvertongue0825

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    Really interesting! It was fun to picture in my head while reading!
    August 30th, 2012 at 03:37pm
  • PopRocksRae

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    like it but the ending was shaky. other than that nice work.
    August 30th, 2012 at 03:08am
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