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  • Martini;

    Martini; (100)

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    pretty cliche. not original at all
    September 6th, 2012 at 12:13am
  • icecreamma22

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    very good how you tied in the comparison to your man.
    Very emotional yet not melodramatic. Nice work..
    September 4th, 2012 at 12:11am
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