How to Write a Love Song for Someone You Don't Love - Comments

Thanks! I do need to focus a lot more on my grammar in poetry, as I seem to be having a bit of a love affair with commas (I'm just as bad with semi-colons in prose). I will definitely look more at my grammar next time I write a poem/song.

Thank you very much for commenting! :D

These are great lyrics. As a poem however, you really need to look at your punctuation. Too many commas. This just means that it's very jumpy to read. That's not to say I don't like it though; no, not at all. I think the title is perfect and the lyrics convey exactly what the title suggests. Just look at your grammar but other than that, very good

Thank you very much and I will bear the comma thing in mind for next time. I kinda just do it out of force of habbit. Thanks for commenting! :D

Thank you very much and I will bear the comma thing in mind for next time. I kinda just do it out of force of habbit. Thanks for commenting! :D

They only thing I wouldn't do is put commas at the end of every line. It made reading it somewhat confusing. Other than that, a good piece I must say :)