Do You Know What It Is To Hate - Comments

Amazing. Love the repetition a lot. "Be strong you're better than that" Perfect.

aw this is wonderful and meaningful and i love the repetition it works well with it as a whole c:

i like what this peom means- it speaks the truth, although your repetition of 'Do you know what it means to hate' can be used strategically- i feel you repeated it too much and it drained the poem, i kept skipping that line and it gave the poem a predictable edge. If it wasnt repeated as much (like maybe after 2 lines and not one) then it might read better? just my opinion. Other than that- i do like this =)

I like the meaning, I like your use of anaphora. But.. I wish it had more description of what these things felt like.

Wow! This is so powerful! I love it!