Her Canvas - Comments

I'm glad you think it is good(:

Really good.. I really like it and can relate to it.

@ Ashes of Scarlett
it isnt awkward at all...i like when i get comments on my writting. that is probably my favorite part to...thanks <3

this is truly brilliant (srry, if me constantly commenting on your poems is awakward or whatever but) i really like this one. i dunno how to explain. just the comparison and the rhymes and once again, it's easy to understand.
"Her crimson blood is the paint,
A silver blade her brush." -- the best part

Thanks<3

What an interesting poem you have made. I really like the 2nd stanza, well descriptive language and so much imagery. Well done :)