Cancer Called Love - Comments

Neptune Blu (100)

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@ Melomane
alrighty :D

September 25th, 2012 at 04:17am

Queen of Suburbia (315)

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@Neptune Blu
I might have because now it does look good.

September 24th, 2012 at 02:02am

Neptune Blu (100)

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@ Melomane
I very much so appreciate your comment :D
I would love it if you could tell me what punctuation mistakes you saw
*you may have read it before I changed a few mistakes

September 22nd, 2012 at 05:15am

Queen of Suburbia (315)

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I love this poem and how the words flow evenly through it. You gave the poem a rhythm, and in return you gave it a life. The meaning is very clear through it, and sadly I can agree so much with what you're saying about love. The only thing I'd say is add a bit punctuation to it and then it'll be perfect.

September 22nd, 2012 at 03:07am