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  • Kanon_21

    Kanon_21 (100)

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    @ UnholyConfessions.
    Thank you!
    October 11th, 2012 at 09:02pm
  • UnholyConfessions.

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    Very simple, but I loved the abrupt ending; I wasn't expecting it at all. I loved the way you set it up as an almost bouncing pace and then killed it at the end.
    Very nice job!
    October 10th, 2012 at 07:53am
  • colddarkheart

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    I love this
    September 22nd, 2012 at 03:34am
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