So many Words - Comments

@ Jar Of Hearts;
Thanks. This is actually something I kinda wrote when I got up one morning. I tried to make it to were it was easier to read since poetry isn't something you normally read. XD

And sorry about the random 0...I have no idea how it got there.

I think the only point you need to improve on is this:

"So many words I0 want to say"

You just accidentally added an 0 there. No big deal.

Wow this was beautiful, I loved your use of repetition when you said:

"So many words I want to leave hanging in the day."

That might be one of my favourite lines, I imagine a noose for some reason when I'm reading that, because I have a weird mind.

It flowed really eloquently, and I tried reading it aloud and it just rolled off of my tongue. It's really well structured, and the imagery used is pretty wonderful. You're really talented at poetry, much better than me haha! I love love love it! Recommended!