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  • Ayana Sioux

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    Yes, that's the same reason why I tend to read haiku's and short poems because it forces you to condense your message and try to make it powerful with the limited space you have. But yeah, good work. I'll probably be seeing more of them.
    September 25th, 2012 at 02:53am
  • AttentionReader

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    @ Ayana Sioux
    Thank you, I'm glad that you enjoy them. I try to make sure that I kind of break the conformity normally seen in Haikus, you see I avoid writing ones about nature and love most of the time, but those are always fantastic places to start. I prefer writing haikus because they are so limited that it kind of makes me think of anything I want, but how to condense it. I'm excited to know that someone other then my english teacher enjoys them. I try to write one a day, I just posted a bunch because I have a lot written. Mr. Green
    September 25th, 2012 at 01:59am
  • Ayana Sioux

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    So yeah, since I'm a poem editor, I've read like all of your haiku's that you've posted in the past month or two and I love them. Most haiku's I see are usually cliche love poems and I skim through most poems because I don't have time to read every single one. I just look through to make sure it doesn't break any rules. But I really like your haiku's. They're great.
    September 24th, 2012 at 08:51pm