I'll Always Stay - Comments

Ppl say that bout my poems xD

sounds more like a song. xD

it was honestly a quickly made poem and im still freshly hurt so . but thanx for the comment

The meaning of the poem itself is sweet, but it doesn't flow smoothly. Then again, maybe you weren't going for a smooth flow. It would simply match the poem better and be more romantic to the reader.

Also, "...I'll bring you love everyday, even though your not mine." There's a little grammar mistake here. It's supposed to be "you're", as "your" is possessive like, "your dog. I love your hair. Etc." You use "You're when you want to say "you are". "You are beautiful. You are not mine." Hope this helps. A bit of imagery would be lovely!