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  • Forbidden_Samurai

    Forbidden_Samurai (100)

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    Idk, I kinda like it as it is. A poem for ranting, after all we all rant from time to time, why can't we write a poem that captures the feelings and emotions that can only be caught in a rant? It's a great poem! I especially love that fact that you could make it rhyme, it adds something more to the piece, to the rant. Keep writing!
    October 15th, 2012 at 07:11pm
  • FullBearingStraight

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    I loved it. There is no other way to put how I feel about your work. And I didn't mind the angst so don't worry about it.
    October 13th, 2012 at 11:41pm
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