Mad. - Comments

In line 4, I meant to say, "Like wanting to do-" but thank you so much for the comment. I appreciate the input, and I love how you can see all of what I was intending to portray. . :]

I love the humor in this poem. It's quite refreshing in its lightheartedness, but it also depicts an accurate betrayal of how relationships sometimes feel. Also, in line 4, I think you meant "two" not "to".