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  • Dakotasun333

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    @ Hopeless Dynamics
    Denks bby. *:
    October 19th, 2012 at 02:33pm
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    That. Was deep, but yeah. I really like it. I definitely think it can be more descriptive and maybe try not to sensor it. I feel like you're holding back, and yes it's personally, but no matter what, whatever the author is feeling while writing something is always conveyed in the writing. Readers can tell, but AI definitely think this is good.
    October 18th, 2012 at 09:23pm
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