Loss for Words - Comments

Hey! I really liked this poem and how you structured it. You were able to give the idea of words an image and a personality.

Wow! This is a great poem, it's clear and has a strong consistent rhythm and just wow <3

I really did enjoy this poem, it was very clever and very creative. I would have never thought about words in this way. :) I also liked your structure, it flowed very well and the layout also helped emphasize what you were trying to convey. Keep up the good work!

I really love this poem. I especially enjoyed your comparison of words and infants (I've never seen a word compared to such a thing). I do like your layout. The confusion of so many words accentuates the meaning of your poem.

Explains how I'm feeling at the moment. Lost for words in a sea of doubt! Great poem and nice layout!

@ Jabberjay
Thank you so much for commenting and you're completely right about the buttons, ribbons, and gloss, plus the unrulies. I'll have to start more rigorous proofreading. I changed a few things because of you're suggestions and I think they're great advice. Thanks for you're help =D

I'll be honest, I like your layout, but it's way to busy for me where your poem is lol I'd just go with white there if I were you, though that may just be me, so you can ignore haha. As for the poem, I love it a lot, and I can relate, however I do have a few suggestions and "maybe that's just me" things. "Words are words are words" I would suggest just saying "words", it seams a bit cumbersome to me. "Buttons ribbons and gloss" needs to be "Buttons, ribbons, and gloss" if I'm not mistaken. In the 5th paragraph and the 6th paragraph "unruly" seam to be to close together, though that may just be me (the 4th sentence and then the 1st sentence). Those are just my suggestions though, feel free to ignore or use, and I hope I helped :) I'm not the best writer, so I understand how hard it is sometimes (I can't easily write happy poems either).