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  • JessiKAT

    JessiKAT (100)

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    Thank u!(: im almost 5 months pregnant next week so im really happy at this stage in my life and i wrote it for my unborn child Rain.
    October 25th, 2012 at 11:33pm
  • trappedorange

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    I liked the flow and your word choice was excellent. I also liked the emotion behind it. Well written! Good job!
    October 25th, 2012 at 11:19pm
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