Unfathomable Pain - Comments

Now this.
I absolutely love.
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wow, amazingly written! it just rhymes so well and it's very descriptive. awesome work :)

Flows beautifully, powerful imagery, great pounding rhythm, just beautifully crafted poem. I love it. Great great great. I love the idea. My favorite stanza is the 4th. Your description of pain throughout all of this, just amazing.