Unfathomable Pain - Comments

  • ThatOtherWeirdPoet

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    Now this.
    I absolutely love.
    <3
    January 11th, 2013 at 10:44pm
  • HowlingHale

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    wow, amazingly written! it just rhymes so well and it's very descriptive. awesome work :)
    November 21st, 2012 at 04:57pm
  • FallingGracefully

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    Flows beautifully, powerful imagery, great pounding rhythm, just beautifully crafted poem. I love it. Great great great. I love the idea. My favorite stanza is the 4th. Your description of pain throughout all of this, just amazing.
    October 30th, 2012 at 04:33am