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  • mist_girl

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    @ because chicken wing
    Thanks much Smile
    November 6th, 2012 at 01:45pm
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    "but we were intertwined just in time to fall apart" -loved that line! Overall this was good, just a couple minor grammatical/spelling errors. Nice job :)
    November 6th, 2012 at 05:12am
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