What Have I Done! - Comments

Will do and thank you for the input, and I'm glad you liked it :)

I really liked this poem, it has really good descriptive imagery and i love the theme. One criticism however is there are a few punctuation errors and grammar mistakes- they ruined the flow for me, for e.g; ''squezz'' instead of ''squeeze''. But they're minor issues, fix them and your poem will be perfect! I'm still recommending though. Great job!!! x