A Bombastic Endeavor With a Plethora of Quagmires. - Comments

@ FoolOfSpades

It is rather chaotic isn't it? Hmmm. Thanks for the
feedback!

I think I actually like this. The flow reminds me of chaos. It seemed as though you were trying to portray the message that we are only as valuable as we make ourselves out to be. Not as one, but as a whole, and what the outcome is. Very good, either way. I enjoyed it.