Long Hard Words - Comments

  • Legomannj

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    yeah, I agree with you Dreya. But I'm not good with long hard words=)
    April 6th, 2007 at 10:03pm
  • akmaoptea

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    i like your use of imagery, especially in the first stanza
    and the repitition in the last
    however, there was one spot in the third stanza I think it was were I thought the rhyming seemed a bit forced.
    Still, its good =]
    April 6th, 2007 at 03:19pm
  • Dilt

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    Pure awesomeness:P
    I'm looking forward to make this song with the intruments and all tomorrow^^
    March 31st, 2007 at 12:16am
  • buried_in_memory

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    I really like this one.

    The political mataphors are cool.
    March 30th, 2007 at 10:12pm
  • Legomannj

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    Thank you, all of you=)

    Ja, har et band som heter Our Crazy Roommate, men vi er dritdårlig da=)
    March 28th, 2007 at 08:17pm
  • Vixen

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    Uh er du med i et band?
    Jævli kult a^^
    Bra text til å være på 10min ;)
    March 28th, 2007 at 07:34pm
  • Jack's Cold Sweat

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    I really like this.
    Keep it up.
    March 28th, 2007 at 07:21pm
  • guide_ to _anarchy

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    i guess 10 minutes was all it took because its awesome Clap
    March 28th, 2007 at 05:18pm