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Legomannj
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yeah, I agree with you Dreya. But I'm not good with long hard words=)
April 6th, 2007 at 10:03pm
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i like your use of imagery, especially in the first stanza
and the repitition in the last
however, there was one spot in the third stanza I think it was were I thought the rhyming seemed a bit forced.
Still, its good =]
April 6th, 2007 at 03:19pm
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Pure awesomeness:P
I'm looking forward to make this song with the intruments and all tomorrow^^
March 31st, 2007 at 12:16am
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I really like this one.
The political mataphors are cool.
March 30th, 2007 at 10:12pm
Legomannj
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Thank you, all of you=)
Ja, har et band som heter Our Crazy Roommate, men vi er dritdårlig da=)
March 28th, 2007 at 08:17pm
Vixen
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Uh er du med i et band?
Jævli kult a^^
Bra text til å være på 10min ;)
March 28th, 2007 at 07:34pm
Jack's Cold Sweat
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I really like this.
Keep it up.
March 28th, 2007 at 07:21pm
guide_ to _anarchy
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i guess 10 minutes was all it took because its awesome
March 28th, 2007 at 05:18pm
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