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Zaccy
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Overall this was a really good poem. It really got through to me, and I really liked the last four lines.
One thing though, is to split up your lines into 2-4 or however many stanzas, to make it a neater flow and less jagged.
But pretty nice :)
November 28th, 2012 at 03:52am
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One thing though, is to split up your lines into 2-4 or however many stanzas, to make it a neater flow and less jagged.
But pretty nice :)