The Sky is Blue - Comments

so brief and to-the-point. i absolutely love this style of writing and poetry.
it was almost nauseatingly innocent, with the rhymes and short stanzas. (that's a compliment. nauseatingly is good.)
and the message is so clear and perfect. i love it all.

I really admire your ability to paint a picture and make a point in the most concise manner imaginable. I love it!

It's so cute!!^_^

Ooo me likie. The last line of the last stanza reminded me of people seeing the future. Haha. Great job!