A poem I wrote by tweeting the next line that came to my head. (She ate is the real title.) - Comments

  • forgetfulswan

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    @DarkLighter

    of course i will :)
    December 5th, 2012 at 03:52am
  • DarkLighter

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    That is not impressing? Bull crap. That is extremely good for q line-to-line poem!! I love it :3
    The only advice I want to give would be to add commas. c:

    You should check out my poem book" Remember Me" and comment :3 Pleaseee?
    December 1st, 2012 at 06:25pm