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Riah63 (100)

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i know i wanted to do that but Mrs Honald said we have to get out of that habit

December 3rd, 2012 at 03:58am
butterflywings16 (200)

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I like this one, but the colors of life is still my favorite. :) I think it would be better if you went down a line for each sentece after a comma.

December 3rd, 2012 at 03:46am

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