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  • Riah63

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    i know i wanted to do that but Mrs Honald said we have to get out of that habit
    December 3rd, 2012 at 03:58am
  • butterflywings16

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    I like this one, but the colors of life is still my favorite. :) I think it would be better if you went down a line for each sentece after a comma.
    December 3rd, 2012 at 03:46am
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