The Bringer of Woe, the Harbinger of Life - Comments

thanks.

I chose the center. Not because of preference or anything, I guess you can call me a Christian. We need good and evil in this world. Both are integral. Light created darkness when it cast a shadow. We need woe just as much as we need life."There is a time for everything... a time to love and a time to hate..." Also I don't like religion in poetry unless it is done skillfully and allusively, maybe that's just my personal preference, and reading the Divine Comedy a lot lately. Good effort though.