The crime I won't go to Jail for - Comments

@ UponOblivion
Click on My name where you'll get my profile there will be two bottons next to eachother one saying commet and one saying become firends or something like that I don't really pay attension. I'll do it but do what I said above so you can add more friends. (It will come up in the Alerts click in there and you should know what to do press comfim)

@ freakivampire
Yeah difinitely, I only joined this today so how do I do that ? :P

@ UponOblivion
I guess thats what happens when you're hyperas a motha-fucker. Anyways thank you. Do want to come firends so we can talk more than just this peom?

@ freakivampire
I think you've captured the whole situation perfectly

@ UponOblivion
You think so. I don't know I tryed to make it have like a jumpy beat/ tone

I love the part " one step, two step ..." you really captured the tenseness of the situation.

@ UponOblivion
Awwww thank you that means a lot :D

This is brilliant ! Wow :)