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  • Justlikeyou

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    Ha thanks I do that kinda stuff a lot kinda like to ebb and flow of the words, didn't think anybody noticed though
    January 6th, 2013 at 05:11am
  • like clockwork.

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    I really like what you did with the syllables at the end. It feels like you're actually falling because how it goes from 5 to 4 to 3 syllables. :) Neat idea. Well, good idea, as well.
    January 6th, 2013 at 05:08am
  • Justlikeyou

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    Thank you : )
    January 5th, 2013 at 05:27am
  • yanniboo123

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    I like this it's really good :)
    January 5th, 2013 at 04:36am
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