The Hope To Cope With Lots of Smoke - Comments

@ Googlebugger
I understand perfectly. Everyone has their personal tastes to add. You're welcome!

I really don't care for pulling people in, and I'll do that several more times to several more titles because that is how I am. But in all honesty I really appreciate your comment so thanks! :D

No. The title? Don't ever do that again.

As for the poem...I purely enjoyed it. Really, outstanding work. It sounded like a ramble, or someone talking to themselves, set to a questionable rhyme scheme. It seems like it wants to have meaning, but rather comes out as meaningless self-conversation, which striked me as peculiar...so I loved it. But if you ever plan to pull writers in, you have to be willing to come up with a pleasurable title, one that fits your poem.

Otherwise, it's going to sound like bullshit to everyone else. :)