At the End - Comments

The Warden's Wife (100)

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This is how I feel about the world a lot. Beautiful descriptions as always.

September 19th, 2013 at 01:45am

Forbidden_Samurai (100)

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I absolutely LOVE this piece! Such strong emotion, such amazing imagry and metaphore. I could read this piece again and again.
~Keep writing!

February 12th, 2013 at 09:57pm

Kiiy De Amor (150)

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Omg, love this flow, very effective and very metaphoric

January 28th, 2013 at 09:44pm

HowlingHale (100)

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this is amazing :3 i love how you manage to keep the verses short while making them rhyme and having such a deep meaning. the poems flows naturally and it was just wonderful all in all

January 28th, 2013 at 09:35pm