This poem was amazing. I could feel the love come pouring through my laptop screen:) One day your daughter's going to read this and cry as much as I did. You're a beautiful scenic writer, with lots of voice. Very well done. I've published three of my own poems in an anthology, (young author :D ) and I can honestly say this poem is beautiful. It would make my entire life if you read my poem and gave me feedback, only if you wanted to of course :) Anyways, keep up the superb work, I subscribed. God Bless!