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  • love me love me not

    love me love me not (100)

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    thank u ur very gorgeous urslef lol am jp..no am not but thank u for the comments means alot Smile
    February 21st, 2013 at 02:05am
  • CatieMac23

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    Wow. Gorgeous.
    February 21st, 2013 at 01:25am
  • love me love me not

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    :) thank u becca ur poems r very nice also especially even angels falls but thank u for sharing ur thoughs bout my poem ;)
    February 5th, 2013 at 03:54am
  • becca17

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    this is so beautiful! I could also really feel your love for her through this poem! I loved it!
    February 5th, 2013 at 03:46am
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    :) y thank u ur words mean alot to me but yes i will continue

    thank u :)
    February 5th, 2013 at 02:47am
  • Writer in the Rye

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    This poem was amazing. I could feel the love come pouring through my laptop screen:) One day your daughter's going to read this and cry as much as I did. You're a beautiful scenic writer, with lots of voice. Very well done. I've published three of my own poems in an anthology, (young author :D ) and I can honestly say this poem is beautiful. It would make my entire life if you read my poem and gave me feedback, only if you wanted to of course :) Anyways, keep up the superb work, I subscribed. God Bless!
    February 5th, 2013 at 02:29am