Reality Is A Curse - Comments

this one is my favorite of the ones you've posted so far. Nicely done!

superb girly keep it up

I liked this poem, and I like how at the end you kind of shifted the argument around and looked on the bright side of reality.

Beautiful.

(I think you mean 'perish' as in dying not 'parish' like a church (; )
But anyways, beautiful poetry, as always. Reality really is a curse, isn't it? But sometimes seeing that put into words helps to bear it. This, as depressing as it is, actually lifted my spirits a bit. This subject is one of those concepts my mind fumbles with; thank you for unknotting my tangled thoughts ;) great work!
-V ;)

@ BlackRosesBleedBlack
Thank you for your feedback! :) I purposely turned it around to clear the morbid atmosphere, and to let the readers know that reality can be a blessing if we make it one :) Again, thank you so much for reviewing!

I really enjoyed reading this, but the ending confused me. It changed the mood of the entire poem completely and suddenly. Overall, I connected with it, other than the turn-around last stanza. Keep up the good work!

Adore

This is so amazig keep it up and congrats on the publishing

This is very good.

I honestly love this. You're a really talented poet. :D

It is very stunning=D It really realates to me in a way=D And congates on yougetting published=D

I honestly loved this. You are quite gifted, and I adore how you lighted up the morbid atmosphere with the last stanza. Good job. Congrats on getting published, by the way, it's a wonderful accomplishment you must be very proud of, and I can tell you have the talents, so yeah. Thumbs up! :)