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  • Mr.Cologne

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    this one is my favorite of the ones you've posted so far. Nicely done!
    March 2nd, 2013 at 01:57am
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    superb girly keep it up
    March 2nd, 2013 at 01:51am
  • Obsessive Writing

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    I liked this poem, and I like how at the end you kind of shifted the argument around and looked on the bright side of reality.
    February 16th, 2013 at 08:39pm
  • Jayne Sage

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    Beautiful.
    February 14th, 2013 at 08:30pm
  • HelloIt'sLee

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    (I think you mean 'perish' as in dying not 'parish' like a church (; )
    But anyways, beautiful poetry, as always. Reality really is a curse, isn't it? But sometimes seeing that put into words helps to bear it. This, as depressing as it is, actually lifted my spirits a bit. This subject is one of those concepts my mind fumbles with; thank you for unknotting my tangled thoughts ;) great work!
    -V ;)
    February 14th, 2013 at 02:26am
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    @ BlackRosesBleedBlack
    Thank you for your feedback! :) I purposely turned it around to clear the morbid atmosphere, and to let the readers know that reality can be a blessing if we make it one :) Again, thank you so much for reviewing!
    February 14th, 2013 at 01:30am
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    I really enjoyed reading this, but the ending confused me. It changed the mood of the entire poem completely and suddenly. Overall, I connected with it, other than the turn-around last stanza. Keep up the good work!
    February 14th, 2013 at 01:20am
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    Adore
    February 12th, 2013 at 02:06am
  • onlyme_1998

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    This is so amazig keep it up and congrats on the publishing
    February 8th, 2013 at 12:41am
  • Guardian_0131

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    This is very good.
    February 7th, 2013 at 01:08pm
  • ThatOtherWeirdPoet

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    I honestly love this. You're a really talented poet. :D
    February 7th, 2013 at 03:52am
  • Lunar.Moon

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    It is very stunning=D It really realates to me in a way=D And congates on yougetting published=D
    February 7th, 2013 at 03:30am
  • AmbiantFlame

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    I honestly loved this. You are quite gifted, and I adore how you lighted up the morbid atmosphere with the last stanza. Good job. Congrats on getting published, by the way, it's a wonderful accomplishment you must be very proud of, and I can tell you have the talents, so yeah. Thumbs up! :)
    February 7th, 2013 at 03:14am
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