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  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ trappedorange
    Thank you so much it means a LOT!
    April 13th, 2013 at 10:21pm
  • trappedorange

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    Very powerful again!
    You are an amazing poet and all of your poetry seems to have the same spectacular intensity to it!
    Please don't ever stop writing!
    April 13th, 2013 at 10:19pm
  • Cheshire Cat92

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    Gorgeous. That's all I have to say; gorgeous! Your rhyme scheme provides a magical flow and smoothness to this piece; Wonderful!
    March 16th, 2013 at 04:55pm
  • poetryismymedicine

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    keep up your amazing poetry hunn u r really good and understandable
    March 2nd, 2013 at 01:49am
  • Forbidden_Samurai

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    I absolutely LOVE this piece. I just have one piece of constructive critisism: be careful whe writing poems with a rhyme scheme. You did a wonderful job with this piece and its rhyme except for the beginning: it is the only stanza that doesn't have one. It interrupts a poems flow when rhyming comes and goes unless it is a constant variable with a pattern. But other than that, I have nothing else to say against this piece!
    ~Keep writing!!
    February 22nd, 2013 at 06:19pm
  • amber.k.24

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    "The only thing that holds the key
    Is the beauty of a dreamer’s fee"
    this is so lovely! the rhyme scheme is great and it is ended off perfectly!
    February 15th, 2013 at 11:11pm
  • dfident

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    @ writingismypassion23
    Ty. :) lols except my first poems do have typos. I'm just too lazy to press the edit button and edit them haha :) but thank you. I try, but I don't always get the emotion accross the way you do! Keep writing! :)
    February 14th, 2013 at 12:53pm
  • HelloIt'sLee

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    My dear, you are incredible and your poetry is transcendent. It's rather impossible to express my adulation for your writing, as well as your optimistic demeanor. Do keep up the great work; I quite admire and respect how you never censor your feelings or your truths. I commend you.
    -V ;)
    February 14th, 2013 at 02:33am
  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ dfident
    I know, I cringe everytime I read over the typo. Oh well:) And your review just like made my entire life :) You're such a talented writer, not many people can pull off free verse as well as you do, be proud of yourself for that! Hallelujah for no typos in your poems ! ;)
    February 13th, 2013 at 10:40pm
  • dfident

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    Alright this was too great. It is soo much like my style of writing... Umm I believe thrid stanza there was supposed to be a "to" not "t" but the form... the rhyme scheme... absolutely stunning! Well done! Please review my poems! I would love a poet such as yourself to review mine. You have an amazing talent please keep writing! You have far to go with such a young age. Be proud of how proficient you are at your age! :)
    February 13th, 2013 at 12:59pm
  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ shorttNsweett
    Thank you so much! It means the world to me, I'm not that old, so I'm alway so insecure about my writing. Again, that just made my day :D God Bless
    February 13th, 2013 at 12:25pm
  • ShorttNSweett

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    Beautiful. I'm so in love with this poem. Just amazing:)
    February 13th, 2013 at 08:41am
  • yanniboo123

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    Amazing poem I absolutely love this great job ;)
    February 13th, 2013 at 05:31am
  • Guardian_0131

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    Wow, this is beautiful, you did a really great job! :D
    February 13th, 2013 at 01:45am
  • matchesandpropane

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    this is beautiful, I love it. keep up the good work!
    February 12th, 2013 at 03:52am
  • Lunar.Moon

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    Absolutely adore it :)
    February 12th, 2013 at 03:14am
  • ThatOtherWeirdPoet

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    I absolutely love this poem. ^_^
    February 12th, 2013 at 02:31am
  • OurLullaby

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    :) We need to be friends. I adore this poem!
    February 12th, 2013 at 02:02am
  • onlyme_1998

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    Love this poem, exspecially the note arbout the best poets heing the wierdest
    February 12th, 2013 at 01:15am
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