A Poet's Reality - Comments

@ trappedorange
Thank you so much it means a LOT!

Very powerful again!
You are an amazing poet and all of your poetry seems to have the same spectacular intensity to it!
Please don't ever stop writing!

Gorgeous. That's all I have to say; gorgeous! Your rhyme scheme provides a magical flow and smoothness to this piece; Wonderful!

keep up your amazing poetry hunn u r really good and understandable

I absolutely LOVE this piece. I just have one piece of constructive critisism: be careful whe writing poems with a rhyme scheme. You did a wonderful job with this piece and its rhyme except for the beginning: it is the only stanza that doesn't have one. It interrupts a poems flow when rhyming comes and goes unless it is a constant variable with a pattern. But other than that, I have nothing else to say against this piece!
~Keep writing!!

"The only thing that holds the key
Is the beauty of a dreamer’s fee"
this is so lovely! the rhyme scheme is great and it is ended off perfectly!

@ writingismypassion23
Ty. :) lols except my first poems do have typos. I'm just too lazy to press the edit button and edit them haha :) but thank you. I try, but I don't always get the emotion accross the way you do! Keep writing! :)

My dear, you are incredible and your poetry is transcendent. It's rather impossible to express my adulation for your writing, as well as your optimistic demeanor. Do keep up the great work; I quite admire and respect how you never censor your feelings or your truths. I commend you.
-V ;)

@ dfident
I know, I cringe everytime I read over the typo. Oh well:) And your review just like made my entire life :) You're such a talented writer, not many people can pull off free verse as well as you do, be proud of yourself for that! Hallelujah for no typos in your poems ! ;)

Alright this was too great. It is soo much like my style of writing... Umm I believe thrid stanza there was supposed to be a "to" not "t" but the form... the rhyme scheme... absolutely stunning! Well done! Please review my poems! I would love a poet such as yourself to review mine. You have an amazing talent please keep writing! You have far to go with such a young age. Be proud of how proficient you are at your age! :)

@ shorttNsweett
Thank you so much! It means the world to me, I'm not that old, so I'm alway so insecure about my writing. Again, that just made my day :D God Bless

Beautiful. I'm so in love with this poem. Just amazing:)

Amazing poem I absolutely love this great job ;)

Wow, this is beautiful, you did a really great job! :D

this is beautiful, I love it. keep up the good work!

Absolutely adore it :)

I absolutely love this poem. ^_^

:) We need to be friends. I adore this poem!

Love this poem, exspecially the note arbout the best poets heing the wierdest