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  • Formaldehyde.

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    Wow. This was beautiful and displayed so much emotion through only a few lines. Wonderfully written!
    June 15th, 2013 at 10:52pm
  • laredo.

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    I can really relate to this one. I like how you write short poems that evoke so much emotion in the reader. Recently, I have been thinking about a guy from my past who always makes me wish we could try again. I don't think I could write a poem as gorgeous as this to capture my own feelings. Thank you for writing this.

    But I like the decision you made (as Cheshire Cat92 also said), to eliminate punctuation because it made the poem seem more emotional and pure. Poetry is always best when there is emotion and you really captured that here. Good job!
    June 15th, 2013 at 05:25am
  • trappedorange

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    Again, very well done.
    You have very powerful and adept word choice.
    Keep it up!
    April 13th, 2013 at 10:18pm
  • Cheshire Cat92

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    I love this poem! Your decision to eliminate the punctuation at the ends of the lines gives it a pained, rushed feeling, as if you just can't contain your emotion. Splendid diction and syntax; keep it up!
    March 16th, 2013 at 04:53pm
  • JoJo_Hockey5

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    Haha this is a great poem:) I like it! Keep witting:)
    March 6th, 2013 at 11:39pm
  • poetryismymedicine

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    wow really good
    March 2nd, 2013 at 01:47am
  • Cosmic_Fae

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    Aww, this is kind of sad... it's like the poem is saying that the significant other is- well, to put it simply, a 'player'.
    March 1st, 2013 at 01:17am
  • HelloIt'sLee

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    Need I say it? I absolutely adore this. No one writes like you do, warm and honest and imperfect and flawless. Don't ever stop writing, and don't ever let anyone bring you down. You are wonderful, and I'm so honored and flattered that you read and commented on my poem!! ;D
    -V ;)
    February 14th, 2013 at 02:37am
  • dfident

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    Hmmm it feels like there is a hidden meaning, a symbol, a story... I love that. Wonderfully done. Simple, but powerful. The best poets write so much with so little words. Well done! Please keep writing.
    February 13th, 2013 at 01:02pm
  • Guardian_0131

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    Wow, this is amazing! I love it!
    February 13th, 2013 at 01:47am
  • onlyme_1998

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    True love (; lol
    February 12th, 2013 at 03:24am
  • Lunar.Moon

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    This I love=D
    February 12th, 2013 at 03:16am
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