Soaring too high - Comments

@ mist_girl
np :) Keep writing!

I talk like that a lot too actually :) but thanks again

@ dfident

@ mist_girl
I know exactly what you mean... I sometimes find myself talking in poetry (IDEK how this is possible it just happens) in my mind. Too bad I can't just think it and it is written because thoughts are always soo fleeting... But for such a young age you have captured a quite the ability! Wonderful job!

@ dfident
Thank you very much I really do just try to write about what happens or things most of us have gone through the words just flow out

Sigh... This poem truly speaks to heart about life. I am sure we have all been in the situation you are in, or were. But from a writers perspective this was excellent. You have found a way to truly capture the feeling and the emotion inside your writing. The end-stopped word "hard" is effective using enough emphasis to really produce an effect on the reader. Please keep writing, you are a magnificent writer. And, if you find the time, please review some of my poems. I would love for writers like yourself to give some feedback upon my poetry. :)