She Wants You. I Need You. - Comments

trappedorange (100)

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This is so powerful!
I can clearly feel and see the extent of the emotion that you've put into this, and it's absolutely amazingly well written.
You really do have a gift for writing!
Keep it up!

April 13th, 2013 at 10:16pm

AnonymouslyLaurence (100)

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You're such a blessed poet.

March 22nd, 2013 at 06:21pm

Aoharu (100)

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This poem has a great underlying tone of sadness. It seems very touchable.

March 16th, 2013 at 07:23pm

Prashant (100)

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the way u express this poem is amazing..u shared the beauty of love n truly nthng could be the best the title u gave this poem "She wants you. I need YOU"

March 7th, 2013 at 08:39am

poetryismymedicine (100)

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wow this touches me and is really good i completely understand the feeling that you were portraying and I can relate so well with this

March 2nd, 2013 at 01:46am

Cosmic_Fae (100)

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I like this one; it really shows the difference between someone who is actually in love and someone who just wants a person for the attention and gifts.

March 1st, 2013 at 01:10am

fssfalcon (100)

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I like this one!

February 18th, 2013 at 08:32pm

leedleleyz (100)

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Beuatiful piece. Can relate. Keep it up (:

February 17th, 2013 at 09:13am

TheShiningSoul (150)

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Wow this is really good! You explain her thoughts and feelings really well :-) x x x

February 15th, 2013 at 05:43pm