Blowing Wishes - Comments

Omg I loveeee the layout. It definitely caught my eye and it goes perfectly with the poem.

I love the way the words flow together and even though the subject is simple, you were able to paint a brilliant picture for something so ordinary with your words. It made me remember when I was little and used to think dandelions were super magical and important and precious. I loved it

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Firstly, I adore the layout. It's just so cute and simplistic, I really love how it ties in with the poem as well.

The rhyme in this is absolutely spot-on, it really links all of the stanzas together. Technically, this poem is amazing but I think it's the subject matter that really cinches it for me. I remember always being so carefree when I was younger and finding the dandelion clocks in my front garden and I get that carefree sense of being as light as the wind, just like I did when I was little. A lot of people regard dandelion clocks as really horrible and I've heard them being described as weeds before, so it's so nice to read something so simple that turns that weed into something absolutely beautiful.

Relateable, wonderfully written and just plan beautiful. I loved this.

this layout is so cute omg
and you're so good at writing poems like yes

This was just so cute and ugh I love it. I don't know how to explain how much I adore it, it reminds me of being a kid when I would pick these. :)

This rhymes perfectly and in the right spots, it paints a picture for your readers and oooh, you're really a good writer. ^-^ This is beautifully done.

This is so lovely! It takes such an innocent thing and crafts it into something so beautiful. It's simple but in an adorable and great way. Good job!

I adore this. It's so sweet and innocent yet so powerful. It's wistful and I love how it rhymes but not in a cheesy overused way. Plus the layout is perfect.