Can I See Your Battle Scars? - Comments

very intriguing way of writing, I think you knocked this one out the park. A lot of people can relate and I think that is why this poem is so great because it is about pain and how some of us cope with it.

You have a great way with words. I like the way this is written. This is a really powerful poem, and I think lots of people can relate to this. I know I can. 'Do you know what it's like to not feel alive?' That line to me is one of the most powerful lines. Maybe because I can relate so well. Great job with this poem. Sorry if this comment was too long. It's kind of a habit of mine.

@ Hockey58Princess31
Thank you! :3

I really like this poem, I think that it captures the idea of addiction really well and it really gives the reader a clear picture of this. I think that is a really powerful poem and you should feel proud of yourself for writing this poem! :)